Your love, like rivers
Moving fast toward the sea,
Slips through my fingers.
The challenge today was to write a Haiku, subject ‘water’, to include a simile. We could have gone off piste with this, however I want to use the experience to see if I can write to order as prescribed. Above is my offering.
Got a bit of a haiku bug, so thought I’d add new ones as they pop into my head. Scan day tomorrow to learn my possible labour fate 😱
I am drowning here;
So scared about tomorrow.
Lost in waves of fear.
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I really like the second one. Good luck tomorrow.
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Thank you x
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They’re both great, I like the simile of the first one, it gives me a good sense of someone scrambling to try and grasp something that’s slipping away, and the second made me smile… good luck with your scan!
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